My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. I am reviewing this poem for the Angel Army Challenge SEP 2020.

THE POEM

The poem takes a heartbreaking look at how Alzheimer's effects the person who has it, and the caregiver.

WHAT I LIKED

Another solid poem that tells a story. Good emotional expression.

STRUCTURE

This is free form poem with an BB rythme scheme. I liked the rythmic flow of the stanzas.

MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

DESCRIPTIONS

I liked the stanza: "No longer you remember..." as it paints a visual picture as to how Alzhiemers robs one of memories.

PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

Nice word play. The poem evokes emotion in an effortless way. I have no suggestions for improvement.