Hi AMcDeezy781,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of desperation and fragility. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman who is thinks letting the person she loves go is better for them because she has been emotionally damaged in her life. I am hoping that the speaker can get past her insecurities and trust her partner. I read to the last word to find out if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.