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 If I scream for you, will you come home?  [E]
Part venting, Part Crying, Part expression? Hard to explain, sorry!
by Firekeeper43
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This is a poem about unrequited love. I felt that way about a woman once. It took time but eventually, it passed. I don't think you ever completely get over it. Part of you will always love her. I do hope you find healing though.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: I liked thinking that it was healing for you to write this. Maybe she read it?

What I liked least: Thinking that somebody could be in such anquish.

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