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 Review #4583378 |
| It is my pleasure to read your story, Harvesting Friendship, and give you a review. Congratulations on your 4th WDC Anniversary!  Reader's Reaction: I loved this story, wishing power would go out more often so these kids that use the Game Boy all day long would experience what the outside world is all about. Good story, hope more kids would read this. Characters/Dialog: The characters are well defined, showing us how to commune with the wild life, and go to parks so you can swing on the swings, and enjoy whatever meets your fancy. Emotion/Mood/Atmosphere: The emotions is pure delight, seeing the outside world as a place to enjoy, not dismiss.The mood is disbelief, curiosity, and the joy in finding companionship. The atmosphere is full of excitement, singing along with the crows, making friends with mans best friend, a dog who finally found a good home.  Plot & Pace: The plot revolves around taking advantage of accidents when they happen.The pace moves along, showing all the things that make this young man happy.  Structure - setting & Imagery: The narrative structure revolves around the plot, creating a story that shows all young people there is a world out there to enjoy. It refers to the dramatic action, determine the key conflicts, main characters, setting and events. Favorite Lines: This is a 645 word entry into "No Dialogue Contest" Good job!"Power went off. TV died. A tow headed kid’s eyes went shut then opened to the world. Child hands rubbed them eyes. Little Marvin felt newborn, everything smelled, tasted and looked fresh as the rain cleansed street his feet stepped onto when the front door pushed him outside."  Overall Impression/Conclusion: I'm so happy to find this story that I want my grandsons and granddaughter to read. They love these games too much, they just keep playing them even when we're camping, on trips, or out shopping. I loved the ending.  WriteOn!  Thank you for sharing your work with us! Jeannie Cheering for Martel    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 11/21/2020 @ 1:50pm EST