Hi Kay,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about someone who feels they do not fit in with either gender. I am hoping that the speaker will sort out their sexual identity eventually. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
You responded to this review 11/21/2020 @ 9:12pm EST
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