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 The voice of peace - in still moments  [13+]
Reflecting, sitting still, being quiet and listening to the voice of peace
by penmoves
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I came by your port today and decided to give you a review as well. After all, Anniversary Reviews Forum and Space Blog was designed to get you reviews.

My impression of this item was: This poem reminds me so much of the first few chapters of Proverbs where Solomon is discussing Wisdom. We are currently studying proverbs in my blog forum/Bible study
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#2225667 by Chris Breva
. This poem puts me to mind of Wisdom. If you want to join our Bible study or even just receive the prompts, let me know.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most: "Peace comes by living in true humility
and kindness."

What I liked least: Nothing. I would usually say format because I prefer rhyme and meter, but your words blew me away.

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