Hi Destiny,
This is a wonderful chapter. The chapter opens in the middle of an argument. The reader is wondering what has started it and will read on to find out. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. They are completely absorbed by the animosity that permeates this chapter. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)You have neglected to either double space or indent between paragraphs. You should remember to consistently do this to keep your writing clear for your reader.


The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. Great job.