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Birds Migrating  [E]
English tanka about birds
by Joy
Review of Birds Migrating  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hallo, Joy!
This one showed up on Random Reads.
First impression - I love the title and cover pic.
Then I saw the genres and was warned there was going to be some sadness involved. (Otherwise that would've come as a total shock.)

It's a lovely poem and the tinge of sadness makes it more poignant. Yes, there is hope in spite of the 'law' being unjust in favour of the coward sometimes.

The layout and purposeful lack of capital letters adds to the impact of the poem.

Thanks for explaining the form. I know very little about forms of poetry and like these notes when I come across them.

Thanks for sharing this!

Write On!

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