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 The Wedding is Tomorrow  [13+]
Wedding, worry and wardrobe malfunctions: An officiant's guide
by River
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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This one showed up on Random Reads, and I am reviewing it as I go along. I've just seen the title and brief description, and I'm hooked! *Smile* The alliteration in the brief description is great, as is the 'guide' bit!

Please pick an item type! And, in the 'genres', you mean 'contest entry', not 'contest'. For the layout - perhaps a bit of line-spacing, font, and size to increase readability.

Very interesting to see a different point of view. Generally, the bride / groom / family / friends are the ones who get written about. What lovely, relatable concerns, and how lightly you list them with a tinge of humor! I am intrigued by the mention of 'black' pearls as some cultures are superstitious about wearing black on an auspicious occasion. Finally, ha ha ha ha on the last line!

Thanks so much for the chuckle! *Laugh*
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