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 Feather Spirit  [E]
Small Stone poem
by Lana
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hallo!
I visited your portfolio because you have an account anniversary this month.

The title led me to click on this poem.
The brief description was a bit puzzling, taken with the title, but then I saw the note at the end and realized what you meant! Thanks for the note - I hadn't heard of this term before. I rather like it.

Nice topic for a little poem!

I love the way you have captured the moment fully. The alliteration, rhyme and rhythm evoke the movement perfectly. I could see the bird hopping around and the last line made me smile, too! I like the centered layout. May I suggest some color and maybe a change of font. Also, a cover picture might be nice.

Write On!



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