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 "IF"  [E]
Something to think about when you are really down on yourself.
by G. B. Williams
Review of "IF"  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hallo!
I visited your portfolio as it's your account-anniversary month.

What an inspiring piece. You've classified it as non-fiction, which implies prose, and it is, but it almost reads like a poem. And I like the mix of normal-case and capital letters. The capital letters encourage and motivate. It's almost like you've thought out the other side of the conversation and are answering the doubts that would arise in someone's mind.

This piece needs to be read by anyone who is going through any sort of self-doubts.

The piece works perfectly as it is, but I wonder if you'd like to try playing with the formatting - color, font, size ... just so that the 'look' of it reflects the message you are trying to give.

Write On! Inspire On!


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