Welcome to WdC from the "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Hi Marie, This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anticipation and anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who thinks they are being pursued by a stranger. The reader is wondering if the speaker is in danger. They will read to the last word to find out. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
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