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Greetings, Rose Lee!

Welcome aboard our International Inspiration Station, aka Writing.Com. I saw your post on the Community Newsfeed and wanted to congratulate you on populating your port and finding your way around this vast site so quickly. The following observations are offered in the spirit of friendly hospitality and constructive support, but they are nothing more than on person's opinions, so take them or leave them for whatever you think they may be worth.

TITLE:

The title is a critical element of your composition, because it is the portal through which a prospective reader must pass to enter the realm of your imagination. If that entrance does not spark some sort of interest, chances are he or she will move along to the next item, or maybe even the next author.

The title you have chosen for this composition invites that browser to explore a world of optimism, and it drew me in very effectively.

FORM & STRUCTURE:

The consistent pattern of quatrains (four line stanzas) provides a solid framework upon which to drape the word pictures you are painting, and also affords your audience the opportunity to grasp each thought more completely before moving along to the next.

PICKY COPY EDIT ITEM:

At the end of the first line, "posses" should be "possess."

OVERALL IMPRESSION:

Art happens in two places: in writers' minds as they create it, and in readers' minds as they perceive it. Creative writers explore possibilities through a lens colored by past experience and share them with an unseen audience. They call upon a unique reservoir of such enlightenment, conceptual skill and innovative research to evoke some spiritual reaction from your audience--be it joy, melancholy, shock, or any of a thousand others. You are off to a fantastic start. Write on!

If you are interested in learning more about the craft of composing poetry, or merely chatting with a few like-minded wordsmiths, we would love to have you join our discussions in "The Poet's Place "  group.

Here's wishing you fair winds as you continue to navigate this universe known as Writing.Com.

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
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