Since non-fiction is my forte, I'm especially pleased to find this for review.
The item appears to have been transposed from another publication, judging from the cutline for a missing photo.
Quotations from sources are correctly handled. The various subheadings help organize the material and his football career is organized by time, making it easy to follow. However, some of the material seems redundant, and bits seem out of place. For example, "After a stint with Nacional da liha da Madeira, he signed with Sporting Portugal in 2001" really belongs under Soccer Career.
I do question the ending. The dismissed allegation is hardly a fitting conclusion to an article about a brilliant soccer career. It wants a concluding paragraph for completion.
You responded to this review 09/02/2021 @ 12:48pm EDT
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