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Given: Sep 2, 2021 at 9:29pm
Length: 314 Characters |
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This is a very interesting story.
Ronnie's friend Jake is apparently some kind of very dark and ancient form of inhuman life. I am not sure what he is. It is this uncertainty that makes the story so good. Is he a vampire, or something worse?
I like that Jake's intentions remain hidden until the very end.
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You responded to this review 09/03/2021 @ 8:57am EDT