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 Light the Way  [E]
Thoughts from one of those lonely, late night, lost in thought, kind of walks
by StrangelyColouredDog
Review of Light the Way  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This poem is a strange ride to say the least. it is almost like two poems stacked on one another with slightly different subjects. the upper part goes together but the last collection of lines veers from the path set by the first few stanzas. It might could use a rewrite separating it into two poems.

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