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 The writer in me  [E]
My thought of being a writer.
by Lea Rachel
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Review by Dave
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Greetings, Secretwoman!

Welcome to international inspirational writing community. I discovered this little gem featured in last week's Noticing Newbies Newsletter and wanted reach out with a few comments.

Please remember that these observations are merely one man's opinion, so take them or leave them for whatever you think they may be worth.

TITLE:

The title is a critical element of your composition, because it is the portal through which a prospective reader must pass to enter the realm of your imagination. If that entrance does not spark some sort of interest, chances are he or she will move along to the next item, or maybe even the next author.

The label put on this presentation attracted my attention with it reference to something with which most of us around here are afflicted.

CONTENT:

You have clearly discovered the secret for success: Persistence.

No matter how accomplished someone is, there is always room for improvement; no matter how new someone is to a particular process, there are always others out there who could use your help with a little fresh perspective. We all started from the same point. A prima ballerina began her journey by taking a few faltering baby steps, falling down, getting up, and trying again. Even at the pinnacle of her career, she still practices tirelessly to continue honing her craft.

You have achieved the most important step in this process by capturing your thoughts on paper before they can fly away like fireflies in the night. In that effort, you have excavated a golden nugget from the depths of your imagination. Keep polishing this nugget to maximize the effects and transform it into the magnificent jewel it can be. Write on!

Here's wishing you fair winds as you continue to navigate this universe known as Writing.Com.

Let the creativity flow from your soul! *Cool*
Dave
"The Poet's Place " 
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