Hi Lyria,
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anguish and pain. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about your feelings of inadeuacy. I am truly hoping that you have gained more self-confidence since writing this. I read to the last word to see if this happened. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.