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Review #4656315
Viewing a review of:
Snow's Writing for 2019, 2020, & Beyond  [13+]
This book holds the items for the contest I enter in 2019, 2020, and beyond.
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
         Review for entry/chapter: "The Season of Regeneration" 
Review by eyestar~*
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Sun*Greetings Snow. I am happy to celebrate You with a review on behalf of "Poetry Review Garden [on hiatus]" .


*Flowery* I love Springtime and your title captures the essence of the season of new beginnings.
I liked how you added the fanciful Easter bunny to your natural images of spring. The verbs you use are vibrant and I could imagine the the lambs, chicks and flowers.

*Sun* It is interesting how you use the word "regeneration" in the first verse and "celebration" in the second as I felt the images in verse 2 seem more like regeneration and you use the word "celebrate" in verse 1. Cool switch! A matter of interpretation as they all speak of the newness of spring. *Delight*

*Quill* One glitch I think is that "Its" should be "It's" for "it is" in the first line in each verse.*Wink*

*Butterflyo* Your expression uses all the prompt words in a meaningful way with a happy vibration that suits the theme. Wonderful free verse with its use of the present tense that brings us into the moment.


Thanks for sharing your craft and vision. Write on!

eyestar
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