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Light of a new day   [E]
An unknown memory. Lost, yet, not forgotten.
by Serena Blade
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Yipes this is twisted. This main character did a very bad thing. The interaction with the dog had me fooled until the mention that the light behind them is not dawn but the light from a massive fire. That escalates the whole thing a level beyond on the creep factor. I thought at first maybe a bar fight or a little bitty murder of someone. The fire makes it sound like he painted an entire town red with their own blood and then burned it to the ground. I can't see anything that could have made someone think that the actions were justified.

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