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Review #4670302
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 Maysie  [E]
Flash Fiction
by Jacky
Review of Maysie  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Oh No! Dogs are scavengers even when they are well fed by humans, it's their nature. I liked the way you gave human-like thoughts to Maysie. She is believable and so are her thoughts and actions. I could imagine her every move and see her gobbling the nasty stuff on both occasions. What really got my attention was that after the upset tummy she gobbled up more nasty stuff. This makes your story true to the fact that dogs can not connect eating something with their upset tummies and that they also follow their nose and nature.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WDC members.

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