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Indecisiveness  [18+]
What would you do?
by Happy30s
Review of Indecisiveness  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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The title, brief description, cover photo and genres work for the piece. The monologue itself works well, mentioning different aspects of the need for decision making and the dilemmas faced. It is very relatable, and written without any technical glitches.

The last line packs a punch! *Smile*

SUGGESTIONS:
1. I was sort of visualising this as an interactive. You could have it branch into different professional / personal areas of life, and then further, as the chapters progress, in to various options of these aspects.
2. Keeping it in this format, I'd suggest WritingML like font, linespace and size.
3. I actually would have liked to read more - maybe some examples or a deeper explanation. It's an interesting topic.

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