First Thoughts: This prayer-poem follows the stated form and looks good on the page. The first stanza establishes the speaker, mood, and theme of the poem. The rhythm and rhyming words compliment each other, while the rhythm moves the narrative and spiritual emotions forward at a good pace.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: The last stanza is my favorite because it closes the poem with the most emotion.
Final Thought: I am giving this poem a 5.0 because of the way it shows prayerful emotions.
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