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Review #4695789
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 T.R.   [18+]
a poem I wrote after he changed his mind / circa 2019
by Riply Duke
Review of T.R.  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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A man and a Woman The relationship started to build up. All ingredients were there. That man wanted to enjoy the sexual relationship, but the narrator started to love him seriously. She wished to spend the rest of her life with him. He went away from her life brutally. But the sign of his presence remains with her. She nourishes them with care. She also waits for him. This waiting period will be endless or not, only time can tell that.
But, a proper love story is there, there is no doubt that. Imagery is beautiful.
I can see a bright future of the poet.
Keep writing.

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