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I Must Love You  [13+]
A Horror story which is supposed to be exactly 500 words. . .
by Weirdone-Back in the games
Review of I Must Love You  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi, Weirdone-Back in the games , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "I Must Love You because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven forum page.

First Thoughts: The fourth paragraph hooked me with the murder on the night of the full moon. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way the first person point of view and voice are used in this story. This point of view helps the reader understand the motives of the main character.

Final Thought: This is an intriguing story with a sympathetic main character.

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