First Thoughts: The fourth paragraph hooked me with the murder on the night of the full moon. The speaker moves the narrative forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.
Suggestions: I found no technical problems.
My favorite part: I like the way the first person point of view and voice are used in this story. This point of view helps the reader understand the motives of the main character.
Final Thought: This is an intriguing story with a sympathetic main character.
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