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 Light  [13+]
A diary of Alissa. Alone, deny, confused.
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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is a part of Alissa's diary. She belongs to the LGBTQ community. So, she gets hate from every corner of society. It is a burning issue in our material world. That is the subject of this tiny story.
The number of characters is also minimum. They are non-LGBTQ community and LGBTQ community. Others' hatred gives them pain and makes them alone. Confusion grows up in their mind. That does not allow them to behave normally. This unfortunate happening is there but it does not hamper the pace. This is the prime beauty of the short story.
It is a great beginning.
Keep writing.
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