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Review #4710528
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 The Situation of A Song  [13+]
She has sung in the sun in the city of blues
by Vistadream
Review by intuey
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello Vistadream Happy 23rd WDC Birthday! This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum"  [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with. *Smile*


*Reading* A nice little prose of a man listening to and adoring his one true love. He gave her a ring and enjoyed the happiness and song it brought to her lips.

*Balloon2* Title and Description - Interesting title choice. After one reads the piece, the title makes sense. It did catch my attention, and the catchy description urged me to read on.

*Penr* Theme/Subject Matter:- The happiness a marriage propsol brings both partners. It makes one sing, and the other enjoys watching and listening to her sing.

*Penb*Originality/Creativity:- A good spin of originality on a common subject. I thought the viewpoint you used was quite creative. Nice job!

*Flower3*Emotion/Impact: - I felt the love he had for her, and she for him. The piece left me with a smile. The world would be a happier place if all could find such love.

*Balloon4* My Suggestions - I only have a very few minor suggestions. Please use or discard them as you see fit.

*Reading* shimmering of love

shimmering with love

*Bookstack* I cry of these blues

I cry from these blues

*Peng* 20 karat

20-Karat

*Reading* I sing la la la

I sing La, la, la

*Penv*My Favorite Part: -Meaningful song from above
With a windy smile shimmering of love
In the sun drawing the doves


*Peng*Summary: Thank you for sharing your prose with us. I enjoyed it.

*Quill* KEEP ON WRITING ON! *Quill*

*Heart* Intuey

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