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 V-Day  [13+]
Because Valentine's Day is a disgusting disgrace
by Elisa the Bunny Stik
Review of V-Day  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Crap is right to a degree and yes, it is a money waster, but people do enjoy this excuse for spending their hard-earned money. I agree with you because I believe it is more important to share time, talent, and affection toward a person, valentine or in other situations special someone, family, and friends. Everyone will die unless God plucks them off the earth body included. We can not take anything with us. Things deteriorate. We are what we have as far as companionship is concerned. I have yet to enjoy a conversation with tools or kitchen appliances, but I have enjoyed the company of people. You have a good point of view that makes cents to me--a penny saved is a penny earned.

My first thought for this unique writing is to add [dark] to the genres. This would help potential readers especially those who are looking for dark types of stories and poetry to find this word art.

I would consider the opposite point of view because people like things, like giving things, and when they can not think or do something more personal and have to rely on comercialism/possessonsisms...well what else is there to write?


Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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