Your vivid description of the thunderstorm brought me fully into your poem. I could see, hear, and feel the percussion of thunder, the flash of lightning, the pounding of the rain against the sidewalk and other surfaces. It was in my imagination as if I got wet and experienced the actions of the storm.

Changing the genres would help potential readers find your poem. [Experience] would cause me to wonder what experience and I would probably read your poem. Personal would work because this poem is about your experience with thunderstorms. Action/adventure is a possibility because the storm is action, and experiencing a thunderstorm can be an adventure.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art and the thunderstorm with me and WdC members.

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