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 Forgetting Things I Can't Remember  [E]
A poem about grieving
by Wilderness Dude
Review by JACE
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Wilderness Dude .

I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Forgetting Things I Can't Remember"  in honor of your WDC anniversary. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your offering, despite the sad reason for its existence. Grief can be a paralyzing emotion, even tougher to find one's way forward.

I find as I approach 70 years of age, I can scarcely think of anyone I know that has not experienced such grief. Thank you for sharing.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I noted no obvious spelling or punctuation errors. Of course, such poetic forms allows great latitude in formatting.    

*Star* My Rating. 5.0 .  Great job.

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering, and I look forward to seeing you around in the coming year. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.

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JACE

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