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 What is Success?   [E]
A brief paragraph I wrote out of boredom that I posted on here because why not?
by Ash
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! It is truly a fantastic paragraph that tells us about success and successful humans. Even, the writer fortunately sees a lot. She is below fourteen years but that is none other than a number. Her experiences tell the same. If you see more, you must learn more. So, the author can write a meaningful passage like this one.
This paragraph tells us how you get success. What is the definition of success? According to the writer's opinion, success is nothing but something you accomplish and that you are happy with the things in life. If we follow those instructions seriously, we must get an improved and better life in the real sense. Peace will also be there.
But, except for a few people, the maximum people do not follow that. Therefore they can not touch the success ultimately. So, successful people are gradually minimized.
The attempt of the writer to rectify our society.
I hope that every person takes this advice positively, otherwise, we can not prosper as an individual or as a nation.
It is a brilliant beginning. Go ahead.


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