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 Flight 363  [ASR]
A short story about going to space.
by drainfall
Review of Flight 363  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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It is one of those fantastic stories I ever read. It is undoubtedly an adventure story. The narrator of the story with some of his friends decides to go to space. What happens then? This is the subject of the story. It has enough ingredients to be a successful story. There is no doubt about it.
The story begins. The atmosphere is funny a bit. But we can see there are some uncertainties in their minds. The writer expresses that unknown anxiety fantastically. A few indications are there to signify that everybody carries a secret uncertainty in their minds. It is not an easy task but the author does it intelligently.
At last, that unfortunate moment appears what they do not want but how can a human fight against destiny? Is it possible? No, it is not possible in reality. The writer also follows the same. He does not try to do anything unrealistic. That makes the story tragic a bit but can draw a real and believable image. This is the prime beauty of the story.
But, I want to mention another thing. That is the characteristic of this story suited for a short story but not for a Novel.
But, I can assure you that another bright future of the WDC has appeared. Keep writing.

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