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 The gap of the elevator doors  [E]
The hurt need love
by Guimo
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a brilliant writing effort. There is no doubt about it. That well-written paragraph deals with a very important topic. That is none other than human psychology.
When we are hurt due to an incident, it is not easy to recover soon. Only a proper can do this magic. Love has such a magical power which can cure the wounds of the heart. In reality, we want to come closer to that soul who can love us selflessly. Fortunately, if we come in contact with that person, we feel immaterial pleasures. No question can be raised about the matter.
Today, it is very difficult to get this pattern of unconditional love. So we are losing faith in a relationship. Therefore, we often witness a lot of break-ups.
My humble suggestion to you...
You have superb expression ability. But choosing a genre is not up to the mark. How love can be a great healer, is the subject. Every affair is an emotional matter. So, the 'Emotional' must be a genre.
How do you come to this decision? From your experiences of life. So, the 'Experience' should be another genre. Selection of genres is an art. So, be careful about that, too.
Overall, the performance satisfied me.
Keep writing.

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