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The Candle's Flame of Hope  [E]
My winning entry for "The 'I AM' Imagery-Prose" Contest
by Dave's gone until 5/23/2024
Review by JCosmos
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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nice extented metaphors about writing as being a candle of hope. I like the second verse references to
My mellow glow with a glass of Chardonnay sparks the spirit of romance between a couple, as he reaches across the table to give her hand a gentle squeeze while the violins play Cupid’s entrancing refrain

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