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 In the Dark  [E]
More spoken word poetry of mine
by AJ Feucht
Review of In the Dark  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is truly sad-toned poetry but very interesting. It is indeed a brilliant performance, especially from a newbie.
They are in a relationship. It is very close.
Time changed. Now the narrator is in extreme dark. Even though, the teller feels the lover and also feels his warmth and movements. He needs her help as a well-wisher. But, on the other hand, the teller is also in deep trouble. So she can not extend her helping hands in time. So, he was lost in the dark forever.
The poet uses a group of the simplest words. But that is enough to visualise the entire story in front of the reader's eyes. That is the main part of the poem. It is well-paced and helps to achieve awesome readability. There is no doubt about it.
Everything going well. A bright future is waiting for you.
Suggestion
Always remember that 'None' is a negative genre. Try to avoid it always. The poem tells extremely dark situations. So, the 'Dark' is a perfect genre.
It also tells about a relationship. Therefore, 'Relationship' should be the second genre.
It is a part of a biography. So, the third genre is 'Biography'.
Except for the genre selection, it is brilliant poetry.


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