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Happy Birthday  [E]
Monty and Jacqui's Birthday
by TheBusmanPoet
Review of Happy Birthday  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Greetings, TheBusmanPoet .

I'm Jace, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Happy Birthday"  for the "~ The Poet's Place Cafe~"  group. *Smile*

*Puzzle4* Form.Initially, I thought your poem following an a-b-c-b rhyming pattern. But a couple of stanzas didn't follow this pattern.

*Note1* Overall Impression. I enjoyed reading your poem. It's always fun to read about cats (or other animals) being saved. My wife is partial to cats, and has saved a number of them over the years.

I stumbled over reading the following line: It cost the lives of our Mama and Jack so they wouldn’t be euthanized,    Perhaps you can explain the meaning of this line.

*Exclaim* Technical or Editorial Considerations. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your poem.

         *Bullet* Your first line has an incorrect word usage:   Monty and Jacqui we’re  Monty and Jacqui were

*Star* Rating.  4.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinions.


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JACE

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