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The Inner Character of a Person  [E]
What truly lies within ones heart.
by TheBusmanPoet
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings, TheBusmanPoet .

I'm Jace, and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "The Inner Character of a Person"  for the "~ The Poet's Place Cafe~"  group. *Smile*

*Puzzle4* Form. Yours is a free form poem. I'm taking the moment to pass on a few comments on your offering in particular, that I found on the Read & Review feature.

I'm not particularly good with reviewing free form poems; thus, I'm forcing myself beyond my comfort zone.

*Note1* Overall Impression. Your words should resonate to anyone who purports to be a good person. Today's society seems to show goodness in decreasing quantities. Though short, I find reading your poem peaceful.

I admit I don't understand some of the punctuation you used. Please explain I'll address that below.

*Exclaim* Technical or Editorial Considerations. I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your poem.

         *Bullet* Why did you place a semi-colon after heart? It felt like the end of a sentence.

         *Bullet* Since your poem has no set form (that I could determine), why not place 'And' to start your third line. As a reader, I found it a bit distracting.

         *Bullet* An apostrophe is needed to reflect possession.   ... person's character ...

*Star* Rating.  4.5. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinions.


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JACE

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