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Review #4738525
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Review by Rhyssa
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hey, stopping by on my way through "Wonderland to take a look at my fellow mad wanderers. I've enjoyed reading your journey. I'm so sorry to hear about your bones and the difficult time you've been having. I especially enjoyed the Educations that you chose. I wish that people would learn how to close the door after themselves (or leave it open as the case my be). In our house, most of the doors in the downstairs (not the bedrooms, of course) are slatted two part doors that meet in the middle. And when my nieces and nephews were young, they would slam them shut over and over again as they went in and out of the living room. Yes, we wanted them to be shut, but we also wanted the kids to pick a room and not run like whirling Tasmanian Devils all over the house. Ah well.

I also liked the poetry, especially the mirror one. I love the feeling of disconnection--as though the mirror world has totally made the speaker float between actions--which is kind of what I think happens when staring at a mirror for too long.

Good work. I'm only on the second part B, so I haven't read ahead to see what you've done further up the path from me, but I'm looking forward to getting there soon.

Good luck as you wander through the madness. Thanks for joining me here.
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