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Review #4738526
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 Wonderland Again.  [ASR]
another trip down the rabbit hole...
by Spring in my Sox
         Review for entry/chapter: "A2. "Mirror Writing"
Review of Wonderland Again.  
Review by Rhyssa
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Just passing through, joining my fellow mad wanderers through "Wonderland

I don't like reading ahead of where I am in our trail, but I've enjoyed catching up with your journey and look forward to reading more. I love the way you've linked all of your prompts into a single journey. I know it isn't easy because some of these prompts are so random when compared with the next in the list . . . I just have to say I'm impressed in general.

In specific, I've enjoyed your poetry--the mirror poem that I've ended with for now was clever. I liked how you were following a cat just like Alice did in the story. I really liked the two parodies that you did earlier (the chihuahua dog felt like it was truly connected to Carroll's little Crocodile, and then your Twinkle twinkle little cat . . . that truly reminded me of Carroll's own parody of that song that the dormouse sings during the tea party chapter. So clever all the way around.

I also really enjoyed what you did with the story of the tart trial. I liked the dialogue and the way you got your character out of the accusation and kept everyone's head on their shoulders. To me, given the character of the Queen of Hearts, it makes sense that she was the one who ate the tarts in the first place. Clever again.

It's been fun trailing along behind you on your journey through wonderland, and I'm looking forward to continuing that journey as I follow you towards the end of the trail.

Good luck.
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