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Review #4738625
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Angel in Wonderland  [E]
A little girl and a sleepy pug dog on a grand adventure… plus other fun stuff!
by Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽
         Review for entry/chapter: "Mirror Writing
Review by Rhyssa
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Just slipping past on my wander through "Wonderland to take a look at your own mad wander.

And I have to say that this was a lot of fun. I like that you were able to find a way to tell a complete story through the prompts. I'm looking forward to seeing what new adventures that Angie and Fluffy get themselves into in Looking Glass World. I enjoyed bringing in Abe Lincoln as major character in Wonderland--getting her started on the quest. I liked how you made time the primary problem and how you ended up making the resolution of the problem about friendship.

The squirrel race was cute--and I liked how you awarded the crown to the one who was most scared, and that he didn't want it. After all, maybe we should only give power to people who don't want it.

I thought you did a good job with the poems. The mirror poem was thought provoking and I liked how you shaped it. The little pug poem was so cute and fit because Fluffy is a pug of course. I liked how you fit a description of the dog into the rhyme scheme. Very cleverly done.

I think you've done a great job so far in your journey through Wonderland, and I look forward to reading more as you go.

Good luck.
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