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Worlds Worst Passenger  [13+]
The world's worst passenger. Written for Writer's Cramp
by SP is Muddling through
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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"Game of Thrones
Hi! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes.
Title: Worlds Worst Passenger
First Impression: Phew! That Mr. Ultra Platinum is a nasty piece of work. Thank goodness I have never encountered anyone like him the times I have chosen to travel by air. Where did he learn that a simple credit card afforded him special consideration? Talk about entitlement. Link Stokes is the poster child. I feel no sympathy for this inconsiderate bully and his ultimate fate. Disorderly conduct? His actions were more like despicable conduct.
What needs your attention: Nothing as far as I can ascertain. This story stands as it is. Do not change a single thing.
What part I liked best: Although I dislike Link and his ilk I liked the way you described him with his words and actions. He cares for no one but himself. He berates the counter clerk. He threatens to sue. He carelessly boards the plane. He ignores the comfort of the elderly woman seated in front of him and then insults her as well. He ignores the flight attendant. I chuckled when he spilled his underwear onto the floor, not once, but twice. I cheered to read he'd been escorted off the plane. If I had been there I'd be cheering the loudest. The sad fact is that people like this walk amongst us, oblivious to their obnoxious behaviour.
Overall Impression: This story and its aftermath are brilliant! I suspect we have all encountered an odious creature such as Link which is a name that rhymes with dink. Hooray, Mr. Stokes angered the wrong person and earned his comeuppance. Why be so loud and vulgar if you do not wish to be noticed? Let this be a cautionary tale for the rampant bullies of the world. You may well star in a viral video.
Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure. What does the fox say??? Listen carefully. ( 1937 characters )
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