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 Up, Up and Away  [13+]
The hot air balloon ride had been on her bucket list, until her birthday.
by Legerdemain
Review of Up, Up and Away  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Legerdemain! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" .

*Reading* Wow. Great story. The title caught my attention, and reading the description, I knew something was going to happen, but I had no idea what exactly.

The story is a lesson in treating others nicely. After a while, one is sure to get what's coming to them, if they keep mistreating others.

Your writing reflects how hateful he was. And we had a hint at that just by saying he had missed her birthdays for the past few years. Then we are slowly introduced to his arrogance and temper.

By the time he has his 'accident,' the reader doesn't feel a bit sorry for him. At least, not this reader. *Wink*

I was surprised by the twist at the end. Maybe I should have seen it coming, but I didn't. It's hard not to be happy for her. When you understand what she's been putting up with for years. Still, you can't excuse the actions. No matter how much you may understand them!

You do a good job of writing the relationship between the characters. And an excellent job of getting the emotions of all the characters across.

The setting is nicely written throughout the piece. It easily allows us to envision each scene as we read. Well done!

I enjoyed reading your piece. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

*Heart* Tracey

"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister
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