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 Bubba's Corner BBQ - Entry 4-12-24   [E]
A local provides directions and assistance to get to Bubba's BBQ.
by J.R. PETE
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

This is a review for "Bubba's Corner BBQ - Entry 4-12-24 "  from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" 

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*Reading* THE POEM

Getting to Bubba's Corner BBQ isn't easy - especially if it's not on a corner.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I loved the ending and the explanation why Bubba's Corner BBQ wasn't on a corner. Heck, I wouldn't want to be on a corner if I was usin' my own brew, too!

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free from poem with a AABBCC rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Soon, turn at the old brown stump with the dead skunk hangin' high," I was laughing at that visual an old brown stump and a dead skunk haning' high over the stump. It's nasty funny. The author did a great a job following the prompt and not using directional words.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader. If anything, it's always a challenge to use a dialect because you want to be authentic, but at the same time, it can be hard to understand. I appreciated the fact that the tone was very authentic to the prompt, but I had to slow down and re-read to really get it. Give and take, I suppose. Overall, the poem is a hoot and lives up to the comedy genre.

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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