"The Iron Bank of Braavos"  "Game of Thrones" 

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My name is Angelica, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Sydney x Lysithea, soft vore, first time

First Impression: Sydney was shrunk to three inches again. For the seventh time this week. She ran around searching for a place to hide. Instead she got Lysithea, the fox who she trusted the most not a part of her team. Her team was the worst when it came to facing them. Every single one of them did something bad to her previous times. Lysithea got the idea to hide her in his stomach. He tasted her before swallowing her. Then welcoming her as a guest in his stomach. Lying to one of her team members about her wherabouts. She remained calm and collected. Trusting him the most.

This must be a scary moment for Sydney as she was shrunk again. What's the worst that could happen? A few possibilities are given. The worst being her team members. They might try to fit her in their private parts for hours trying to get away with it. Or try to suffocate her. She wasn't going to have that happen again. She was going to try to run and hide. And ran into the person she trusted more than the others the most along the way. Lysithea decided the only place to hide her was in his stomach. Great twist. That would be a scary trip as well.

What needs your attention: No spelling or grammar errors found.

What part I liked best: Lysithea is a friend despite being feral in some manners. Sydney has a place to hide for unlimited time.

Overall impression: Great details going on. The situation at hand and what had happened to her in the past. Reason for her anxiety and fear. She couldn't trust anyone on her team. But she ran into someone she could trust. And he went to work straight away before her team member could find out. Good job and keep up the good work!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

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