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Review #4745220
Viewing a review of:
Those Who Live in Grass Houses  [18+]
All the GoT stuff, 2024.
by Beholden
         Review for entry/chapter: "A Slight Adjustment" 
Review by Lornda
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hello, Beholden !


*Sun* I'm back again to read another one of your stories written for GoT! I found this one on the newsfeed, and you're right, the items we write for a book item, hardly get reviewed. I'm glad you posted this one because I enjoyed reading it! As I read a long, I couldn't help but think of WdC as your poor main character argued his case. Lol! It worked well with the prompt. Way to go!

*Sun* I thought the main character was written well for a short word count, and I pictured him as a distinguished gentleman. When the story got into the deeper conversation, I thought he kept his composure really well—I felt like yelling at the literary critic. Lol! Good job with developing the whole story to keep the reader's attention, and the dialog kept it all going at a good pace. I felt the frustration Chandler had while discussing the problem with this guy. It's a typical conversation when someone doesn't read your work and then, decides to give it a negative review. I liked the way he fought for what was right!

*Sun* Overall, a great story for the prompt! It was developed well from the beginning to the end. I'm so glad that Chandler fought for what he wanted and didn't let this guy intimidate him. My favorite part was the bantering back forth with the conversation. I liked the ending and the title was perfect! *Stary* I'm sure I'll be back to read more!

*Swords* Lornda


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