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In Her Memory  [ASR]
A memorial remembrance of my Mom
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Review by Maryann
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*Exclaim* Hi Webwitch. I thought this was truly a beautiful tribute to your beloved mom, who passed in July of 2013. ...Or as you were calling it, 'A memorial remembrance'. I also thought it was nice that you had added the memorial tribute to a newspaper in remembrance of her. It was good, I thought, that you added a message about that near the bottom of your sweet poem.

This item has a very pretty ribbon on it. Very thoughtful of the person to have added it. I see that you have review only so I can't give you any stars, but of course, I would give you ten if I could for this item.

The poem in general is delicate and light, just enough to give dynamic meaning.

It was sweet that you began the poem, 'Mom', as though this were a letter directly to her. I'm sure if she could see it, she would be honored and feel loved by her darling daughter.

You wrote in your poem that Mom didn't pass alone because a piece of you went with her. Yes, I can understand those words. You will always be with her, as she will always be with you. And you expressed that sentiment as well when you mentioned that her love remains. You remember her in smiles, in tears, just everywhere, which is true for our loved ones who are no longer here with us. They will never leave our memories. 'Forever in our Hearts' is a touching sentiment, indeed. I recall seeing that sentiment on memorials of beloved deceased ones.

I thought that you ended this touching, heartfelt memorial poem in a great way. It makes the reader able to imagine that there is hope of seeing those beloved ones once again, as you wrote, in eternity. Well done tribute.



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