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Last Minute Number Crunching

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A person rushes to get their income taxes in on time
by Maryann

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Review of Last Minute Number Crunching

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Rated: 13+

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Hello, Maryann

I'm stopping by to review your entry to the "The Writer's Cramp"

! I had a fun time reading your poem about tax time. Why is it that it comes around so fast? Lol! Your title does a great job on grabbing the reader's attention, and so does the description. I also saw the fun color of the font. Now why would you choose green?

I learned a little something by reading your poem. I see that you have a deadline of April 15th. In Canada we have another two weeks--April 30th. I just automatically assumed that we'd all be on the same "page." I also learned that April 15th was the day the Titanic sunk. I didn't know that either, but I thought it was clever to add that into the poem. With the tax code stanza, I can relate to it for sure. I swear there's a guy up in a little room, who sits there and tries to make it harder every year to file your taxes.

I really liked how it worked up to a funny ending, and of course, you just had to add a little 'tune' to finish it off, too. Lol! The last stanza tied it all up in a neat bow, and wow, great job on the rhyming of those two words. I don't think that was an easy thing to do, but it all fit to leave the reader with a laugh. Well done!