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 I shall perform for you  [E]
just silliness
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This one showed up on 'Read and Review'.

You have great rhythm going there!
I was reading it to a beat and smiling throughout. The crazy rhyming words made for some hilarious images.

Suggestions:
1. Pick more genres - maybe 'entertainment' ... ?
2. While the rest of the poem is happy, the line 'I dance to forget' made it seem like there is a (sad?) story behind this happy dance. Was that deliberate?

Thanks for sharing this one!
Write On
- Sonali

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