*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/newsletters/action/archives/id/6217-First-Date-Awkwardness.html
Romance/Love: March 19, 2014 Issue [#6217]

Newsletter Header
Romance/Love


 This week: First Date Awkwardness
  Edited by: Crys-not really here
                             More Newsletters By This Editor  

Table of Contents

1. About this Newsletter
2. A Word from our Sponsor
3. Letter from the Editor
4. Editor's Picks
5. A Word from Writing.Com
6. Ask & Answer
7. Removal instructions

About This Newsletter

** Image ID #1654495 Unavailable **

Welcome to this week's Romance/Love Newsletter! I'm Crys-not really here and I am your editor today. *Smile*


Word from our sponsor

ASIN: B07RKLNKH7
Amazon's Price: $ 0.99


Letter from the editor

First Date Awkwardness


We've all had them. The awkward first date. Maybe you've been set up by a friend, or met your date online, and meeting him or her in person for the first time. Maybe you met at a party or at school and want to get to know him or her better. Or, you've been friends for years and have suddenly decided to investigate growing feelings between each other. No matter what the circumstances, chances are your first date was at least a little nerve-wrecking, maybe even totally awkward!

When writing about a couple's first date, it's important to remember how you felt on one of your own. Is your main character really excited to get to know this other person? Remember the old saying "show, don't tell"? Don't say "Donna was so excited to meet Brad." Show that through her body language. She may be jumping up and down or grinning at the thought of him. Is she completely terrified? Have her show up the dinner and accidentally knock over a glass of red wine all over the table, or accidentally set her hair on fire with the candle on the table! It can be incredibly fun to write such over-the-top scenes and break you out of the habit of writing paragraphs of boring back and forth dialogue over the dinner table.

Hopefully, you've never had a fire-inducing first date of that nature. *Wink* But I'm sure you've struggled to make conversation with someone you have nothing in common with or made a social blunder in front of a date you were really trying to impress. Including those little moments can be a great way to show how your main character feels. It also helps your reader relate to, and root for, your main character. Everyone loves to see a protagonist overcome her fears and fall in love. Or overcome her fears and realize she is stronger without the other person in her life. Either way, it's essential that you show your reader how the main character feels at every stage of a relationship--from awkward first date to her version of "happily ever after."


Editor's Picks

 Dinner with Gran  [18+]
Ben needs a date. Where's a tall, handsome stranger when he needs one?
by KC under the midnight sun

 Bring It To Life  [E]
a short and sweet poem i wrote after my first date
by ♥~HermyKitteh~♥

A Date At Airport  [ASR]
A sweet romance between a simple girl and a handsome boy.
by LostGhost: Seeking & Learning

 Invalid Item  []

by A Guest Visitor

 Chelsea's Christmas Wish  [E]
All Chelsea wanted for Christmas was a date with Chad.
by OOT™

 
Skate...My First Date  [E]
This is a Child Four or "1962" format, developed by Fanstorian Ann aka ann marie mazz
by Whitemorn

{citem:1947330

 
Submit an item for consideration in this newsletter!
https://www.Writing.Com/go/nl_form

Word from Writing.Com

Have an opinion on what you've read here today? Then send the Editor feedback! Find an item that you think would be perfect for showcasing here? Submit it for consideration in the newsletter!
         https://www.Writing.Com/go/nl_form

Don't forget to support our sponsor!

ASIN: 0910355479
Amazon's Price: $ 13.99


Ask & Answer

Thank you for those of you who wrote in about my last Romance/Love Newsletter about teens and sex in literature.

Thank you for this! Sex is a topic that I touch on very obliquely in my series, and while it has not made me uncomfortable in any way to do so, I have in fact worried about how it would be received. I have no sex scenes, but implied intimacy. -Merry Mumsy

This week, I'd like to know:

What is the funniest/most awkward thing to happen to you on a first date?

*Bullet* *Bullet* *Bullet* Don't Be Shy! Write Into This Newsletter! *Bullet* *Bullet* *Bullet*

This form allows you to submit an item on Writing.Com and feedback, comments or questions to the Writing.Com Newsletter Editors. In some cases, due to the volume of submissions we receive, please understand that all feedback and submissions may not be responded to or listed in a newsletter. Thank you, in advance, for any feedback you can provide!
Writing.Com Item ID To Highlight (Optional):

Send a comment or question to the editor!
Limited to 2,500 characters.
Word from our sponsor
ASIN: B07NPKP5BF
Product Type: Toys & Games
Amazon's Price: Price N/A

Removal Instructions

To stop receiving this newsletter, click here for your newsletter subscription list. Simply uncheck the box next to any newsletter(s) you wish to cancel and then click to "Submit Changes". You can edit your subscriptions at any time.


Printed from https://www.writing.com/main/newsletters/action/archives/id/6217-First-Date-Awkwardness.html