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fundamental emotion that stands at the cradle of true art and true science."
-- Albert Einstein
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CULTURAL DIFFERENCES
As I write this editorial, I'm sitting literally less than a hundred meters from the Indian Ocean at Mai Khao Beach in Phuket, Thailand. My wife and I are on our first real vacation in over two years, and in our research of Thai tourism and culture, it got me thinking about how powerful cultural differences can be, and what great motive they can be in mystery writing.
In Thailand, for example, everyone is exceedingly polite. Thai culture is very concerned with the idea of "face" (either you gain face by being generous with subordinates, deferential to superiors, etc., or you lose face by being reprimanded in front of your peers, making embarrassing mistakes, acting disrespectful, etc.). While people in the United States may be perfectly used to experiencing, for example, a customer yelling at a waiter or retail clerk, that same behavior can have a devastating effect on a Thai waiter or retail clerk's social standing. Similarly, it's not unusual for Thai people to ask what westerners might consider private questions, such as how old you are or how much money you make. But this is most often to either (a) make casual conversation, or (b) help them establish where in the social hierarchy you are so they can treat you with the appropriate level of respect and deference.
When we were in France a few years ago, we were shocked at how long it took to eat a meal there. It's not uncommon for a quick breakfast meal ("le petit dejeuner") consisting of some kind of a baked good (croissant, brioche, etc.), coffee or tea, juice, and bread with condiments like jam, butter, honey, etc. to take upwards of an hour to consume. For full meals like dinners, you can be in the restaurant for as long as two or two and a half hours, even if the restaurant isn't busy and the staff is attentive. French culture is much more leisurely, especially around food. In the United States, dining tends to be a rush job... you spend only as much time as is necessary to actually eat your food, then you're out the door and onto your next thing. In France, they value it as leisure time spent socializing or spending time independently.
Now imagine a story where a character, motivated by a cultural misunderstanding... or using a cultural difference to his or her advantage... ends up pulling off a heist, or a murder, or committing some other kind of crime. While I'm generally one of those "we have more commonalities than differences" types of people, it's hard not to admit that different cultures do have different customs, mores, traditions, and expectations. In a genre like mystery/crime/thriller, many of us are always on the hunt for a new and unique motive to use for our antagonists. It might be worth considering those motives stemming from a cultural difference in some way.
The great thing about the internet is that there are a ton of resources out there for travelers to better understand local customs to the places they want to visit. If you want to write a story where cultural differences play a part in the narrative, you're just a short Google search away. Looking for things like, "Cultural differences between [YOUR COUNTRY] and ____" or "What to know about traveling to ____" or "Things to know before visiting ___" can be great places to start.
Until next time,
Jaeff | KBtW of the Free Folk
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